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Love me forever
Promise not to go
Hold me in your arms
Till the sun no longer shows

We’ll watch the stars in envy
Of our loves true pure glow
The moon will be replaced
As you hold me close

Can’t believe you fixed me
While half my heart was gone
But still you found love in me
So this time I’m not moving on

I’m not letting go
Please just listen

Say forever, cause it’s true
I’ll promise eternity
For baby I know
I’ve begun to fall
In love with you
©2008-2009 ~Felicity2989
:iconfelicity2989:

Author's Comments

a present for my boyfriend,

for making me see all the beauty i have
for him making me understand that i'm more then useless
and for him not stopping to love me, even when everything was hard.

for he is my everything in which i will never let go,
i love you <3
always 'n forever

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:icondarkzero18:
nice poem. wish my gf would write peoms for me a i had did for her. it reminds me of John Legend's song "Save Room" [link]

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I wish my grass was emo. Maybe then it would cut itself.

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Emos are fun...to push down the up escalator.

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HEY YOU! YES YOU! I'M SHOUTING AT YOU IN THIS BOX!!!
:iconfelicity2989:
thanks, :):). i haven't shown it to him yet, he's at work

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they say i can't live without,
truth be told i can
and one day, i really
won't come back

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in a club, write the world:
[link]
:icondarkzero18:
aww...lucky guy who has a caring gf.

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I wish my grass was emo. Maybe then it would cut itself.

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Emos are fun...to push down the up escalator.

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HEY YOU! YES YOU! I'M SHOUTING AT YOU IN THIS BOX!!!
:iconfelicity2989:
lol hehe

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they say i can't live without,
truth be told i can
and one day, i really
won't come back

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in a club, write the world:
[link]
:iconsnoangelbabe:
very nicely written. i totally know how you feel right now. hehe.

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:iconeternaly-shadowed:
Love it sweetie! As always your so talented with your words! ^_^

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~*~Eternal-Shadow-Forever~*~
:iconfelicity2989:
aw thank you *blush* :):)

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they say i can't live without,
truth be told i can
and one day, i really
won't come back

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

in a club, write the world:
[link]
:iconfelicity2989:
very nice :):) gotta love the feeling, and it somehow feels a lot better then before.. and i'm kinda happy about that

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they say i can't live without,
truth be told i can
and one day, i really
won't come back

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

in a club, write the world:
[link]
:iconeternaly-shadowed:
Any Time sweetie! btw, check out some of the writings i've been doing.. i'm sure u know who i'm talking about in them.. lol lemme know what u think.

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~*~Eternal-Shadow-Forever~*~

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